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I wasn’t really a fan of local (Malaysian) movie since I was so disappointed with the Puteri Gunung Ledang Hongkish influence fighting scene (remember when the guy flew on top of the lake and started to have those stupid power); hardly after that I ever went to a cinema, watching anymore local produces movie.

If I do watch it, probably in Astro channel and only when my friend coming over to my house. If not I wouldn’t even change my remote to those specific channel.

I’m not saying all Hollywood movie was good but the quality of movie writing of Malaysian film was really bad (in away); The main issues I kept complaining is, about the cohesive of the storyline.

Today, I went to Pavilion to watch a movie James Lee’s Histeria; with a company of friends after the karaoke session.

Coming out from the cinema, the first word comes out from my mouth.

Sayang.

Why sayang? This not sayang in term of lovely, OK.

Sayang it was so miss.

It’s a movie that was directed well but was sadly written bad. It’s non-logical in away somehow it was a freaking non-sense movie, for god sake – so I didn’t bother that.

I didn’t want to spoil you with the original storyline of the movie; but this my own storyline of the movie, if I was in charge of the screenplay or adapted screenplay, which I think would create more commercial value.

Tho, some part of the movie, which I love – I would stick to it!

The movie is about 6 plastic girls making fun about the mistiqueness of ‘mentera‘, so it was Murni (the main character) – the girl who always got bullied by the other 5 girls – she was forced to read the mentera.

After reading the mentera downloaded from internet, she has becomes the new owner of the penunggu busut.

What does the penunggu busut do actually? The penunggu busut didn’t just kill everyone for fun but only to anyone who’ll threaten the owner.

Since Murni has becomes the new owner and she do get bullied by the other girl always, the penunggu busut will appear or create a fear out of them; which is the real meaning of hysteria.

Not f*cking eating them, blood out!

The first victim would be Ju (the slutty girl), the penunggu busut appeared and make her goes hysteria and lost her mental stability and feel so scared and meet with her teacher (which she always slept with).

Because of the fear, she so stress out, when her teacher try to have sex with her and she kill the guy.

After killing her teacher, she so scared she run away to the bush; and stumble with the gardener (who saw her steeling the magic thingy – that he try to cover it up under the ground) – he was so angry about his secret – kill her instead! 

That’s one plot! Solved one mystery.

In the morning, Zita (the pengawas sekolah) giving out the task (denda) to other 5 girls, and split them into 3 groups. Murni with the another bully girl; the love triangle’s beyatch; and the Queen B with herself.

Now, the another bully girl, try to escape out of the task; beyatch about Murni relationship with the Queen B and Murni went nuts about it, she realise after reading on the Net that she now in control of the penunggu busut and swear it (only will be show at the ending of the movie to create the revealing element) to create the fear out the lady.

When the bully girl went to toilet, she saw the penunggu busut,  that thing will not again eat her blood out but instead create hysteria out of her and she strangled herself by the curtain or whatever.

Murni, who stumble upon the corps of the bully girl – went nuts again realised she’s guilty for swearing at that thing and make her friend kill.

So she kept running away around the school ground.

During that run, she stumble upon Ju corps (the first lady who went missing – killed by the gardener) – and she went more hysterically and she didn’t tell the other four girl, feeling that she was the one who make all this thing happens.

Scared with the bully girl (dead in the shower room), the two beyatch (love triangle) grab a knife and try to run away – and one of them kill the other girl – bcoz of the fear and angry of the love triangle – and after the guilty feeling and she run toward the back gate and climb it and slip herself and break her neck (like Claire’s Heroes – first season). 

That’s one more plot done! Solved another creepy mystery.

Now, to play the lesbian theme on a thriller genre, James better written it good, but he do it so lame!

This how I would write…

Zita (the pengawas sekolah) like the Queen B, (I think her name was As) – she tried to kiss her but she refused it! When Zita tried to kiss her – Murni saw it – she went to the lab (which both of the girl talking) after she was psychotically influence by the bully girl who get killed in the shower.

So Murni feels she has lost the friendship she have with the Queen B, who always taking care of her safety in the group.

Now she swear that thing again, but not to Queen B yet but to Zita.

At the same time – the BF of the Queen B comes with his friend to the school. To make it more interesting – Zita and a friend of Queen B’s BF waiting at the car. While waiting inside the car, Zita saw the penunggu busut – and jump the pedal (to run away) while the guy was fixing the car in front an killed him violently.

She who so scared of the ghost, run over the tree and kill herself hysterically too.

That’s third plot, who yet not get killed hah?

The gardener, Queen B, Queen B’s BF and Murni, correct?

This how I’m going to killed them! 

During the search of other, the Queen B & Murni waiting for his BF who trying to look for the key at the Gardener rooms – and he went inside realise – he was the old owner of the penunggu busut – who feeding it for past few years (he try to cover up the penunggu busut belonging since he is no longer the keeper) – the Gardener and the BF  fight between each other; the Gardener is already dimakan diri of his evil amalan – saw the guys as a ghost and cut his head off!

At the same time, the BF manage to stab him and he was killed too.

Now the ending…

Murni runway and as a bit like movie – the Queen B will be the only killed by the penunggu busut since Murni was so angry with all the thing happens (the lesbian kissing accident and the mentera) and it was all her idea.

For surprise element at the ending, the penunggu busut was next to her bed and revealing all the accident happens actually see by her and her penunggu busut.

Also to add more surprise and aaaaaaaahhhh moment – the penunggu busut is actually her mum (the photo on her cupboard is the clue) who was the lady who get killed in the lab by the gardener (the tell the ghostly story to Zita at the beginning) and is trying to protect her.

The End!

What do you think…

Does James Lee’s original storyline is better than mine? 

P/S : The BIG entry I supposedly write still pending! In a day or two… I promise.

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• bad day(s)!
• Boarding with MHmobile @ flymas.mobi – fly with style!
• classic Malay facebook song
• cerpen – awangan
• bawalah daku pergi biar mati pun ku jalani…