Comments on: resahku sesak di dalam http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/ the virginity and purity of the human soul Tue, 17 May 2011 06:26:01 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1041 wahazaextra Fri, 20 Feb 2009 03:34:05 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1041 Juless, thanks.. looking forward to publish the next story soon; Juless, thanks.. looking forward to publish the next story soon;

]]> By: Juless http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1040 Juless Fri, 20 Feb 2009 00:32:29 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1040 Hello Just came across your story while researching for Malay stories online. I must say that your writing of the short story is top-notch, very engaging and had me enthralled to the end. You should think about making the story into a long form telemovie, it has good potential. Looking forward to your next stories. Hello

Just came across your story while researching for Malay stories online. I must say that your writing of the short story is top-notch, very engaging and had me enthralled to the end.

You should think about making the story into a long form telemovie, it has good potential.

Looking forward to your next stories.

]]> By: Putubambu http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1029 Putubambu Thu, 12 Feb 2009 08:59:58 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1029 wahaza..awak kena tagg ngan saya... <abbr><em>Putubambu´s last thought..<a href="http://putubambu.blogspot.com/2009/02/tanda-tandaapa-bila-bagaimana.html" rel="nofollow">Tanda-tanda..Apa.. Bila.. Bagaimana?</a></abbr></em> wahaza..awak kena tagg ngan saya…

Putubambu´s last thought..Tanda-tanda..Apa.. Bila.. Bagaimana?

]]> By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1028 wahazaextra Wed, 11 Feb 2009 15:41:05 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1028 Kak Putu, itulah.. maybe agak mendalam kot.. storyline tu, next time will improve on it; even Josh pun tak paham till I explain to him this afternoon; like.. the lady on the first episode, is actually Mumtaz herself who open the door, simbolik nak represent that she actually opening her mind up and questioning the thought in her mind about Jehan and the way how easy Suri was following Jehan, bcoz Suri talk to a lady not a man; Kak Putu, itulah.. maybe agak mendalam kot.. storyline tu, next time will improve on it; even Josh pun tak paham till I explain to him this afternoon; like.. the lady on the first episode, is actually Mumtaz herself who open the door, simbolik nak represent that she actually opening her mind up and questioning the thought in her mind about Jehan and the way how easy Suri was following Jehan, bcoz Suri talk to a lady not a man;

]]> By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1027 wahazaextra Wed, 11 Feb 2009 15:36:47 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1027 Ida, thanks for the positive comment; penggunaan perkataan aper, punyer - kind of a mistake... hihi.. however.. I'm try to be contemporary writing especially on dialog side; but next will try not to make it to obvious; Me 2, looking forward for the next story to be publish next week; Ida, thanks for the positive comment; penggunaan perkataan aper, punyer – kind of a mistake… hihi.. however.. I’m try to be contemporary writing especially on dialog side; but next will try not to make it to obvious;
Me 2, looking forward for the next story to be publish next week;

]]> By: Putubambu http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1025 Putubambu Wed, 11 Feb 2009 06:35:06 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1025 ada part yg paham..ada yg tak..sib baik Inah explain... skizofrenia rupanya.. best citer ni..tak sabar nak tau endingnya... good one bro..! <abbr><em>Putubambu´s last thought..<a href="http://putubambu.blogspot.com/2009/02/mr-x.html" rel="nofollow">Mr. X...</a></abbr></em> ada part yg paham..ada yg tak..sib baik Inah explain… skizofrenia rupanya..

best citer ni..tak sabar nak tau endingnya…

good one bro..!

Putubambu´s last thought..Mr. X…

]]> By: ida http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1024 ida Wed, 11 Feb 2009 06:27:39 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1024 mula-mula baca payah juga nak paham. i regard ur cerpen as karya sastera moden bercirikan transcendental, pemilihan kata yang indah dan menyentuh naluri, keindahan bahasa yg u gunakan menunjukkan keyakinan u terhadap bahasa Melayu, tapi ada penggunaan "aper", "punyer" sedikit mencacatkan. saya enjoy sgt baca karya ni, otak saya berkecamuk mencari jwpn, dan semua persoalan terjawab bila baca komen-komen. Looking forward for ur next masterpiece!!! mula-mula baca payah juga nak paham. i regard ur cerpen as karya sastera moden bercirikan transcendental, pemilihan kata yang indah dan menyentuh naluri, keindahan bahasa yg u gunakan menunjukkan keyakinan u terhadap bahasa Melayu, tapi ada penggunaan “aper”, “punyer” sedikit mencacatkan. saya enjoy sgt baca karya ni, otak saya berkecamuk mencari jwpn, dan semua persoalan terjawab bila baca komen-komen. Looking forward for ur next masterpiece!!!

]]> By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1019 wahazaextra Sun, 08 Feb 2009 10:16:29 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1019 AJ, bukan khunsa; Jehan tu imaginasi Mumtaz; pasal rogol tu; dia bunuh je Suri, tapi imaginasi dia Jehan yang rogol; AJ, bukan khunsa; Jehan tu imaginasi Mumtaz; pasal rogol tu; dia bunuh je Suri, tapi imaginasi dia Jehan yang rogol;

]]> By: AJ http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1018 AJ Sun, 08 Feb 2009 10:03:00 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1018 tp mumtaz tuu bkn khunsa, kannn??? (tetap nk tanya ni!!!) abis tu, camner masa dia rogol suri??? aiyoo, maap ler, daya imginasi cheq ni kurengggg sikit... hehehe <abbr><em>AJ´s last thought..<a href="http://alkisah-aj.blogspot.com/2009/02/merisik-khabar.html" rel="nofollow">merisik khabar</a></abbr></em> tp mumtaz tuu bkn khunsa, kannn??? (tetap nk tanya ni!!!)

abis tu, camner masa dia rogol suri??? aiyoo, maap ler, daya imginasi cheq ni kurengggg sikit… hehehe

AJ´s last thought..merisik khabar

]]> By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1017 wahazaextra Sun, 08 Feb 2009 08:41:26 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1017 Kak Teh, to be truth I really get a lot of inspiration from Kak Teh writing.. hopefully able to write in English soon; Kak Teh, to be truth I really get a lot of inspiration from Kak Teh writing.. hopefully able to write in English soon;

]]> By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1016 wahazaextra Sun, 08 Feb 2009 08:39:44 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1016 Ashabulz; thanks 5x; was excited reader love it; Ashabulz; thanks 5x; was excited reader love it;

]]> By: kak teh http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1015 kak teh Sun, 08 Feb 2009 07:21:43 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1015 Insyaallah kak teh akan baca dari mula. Nak kena belajar juga cara menulis cerpen nih! <abbr><em>kak teh´s last thought..<a href="http://kakteh.blogspot.com/2009/02/winter-nostalgia-when-snow-melts.html" rel="nofollow">Winter nostalgia: When the snow melts...</a></abbr></em> Insyaallah kak teh akan baca dari mula. Nak kena belajar juga cara menulis cerpen nih!

kak teh´s last thought..Winter nostalgia: When the snow melts…

]]> By: ashabulz http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1014 ashabulz Sun, 08 Feb 2009 05:43:42 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1014 erk...gila cuak kalau ada orang macam ni...dua perwatakan yang berlainan jantina...*gulp very nice bro..jantung saya suspen macam nak pecah dah...janganlah ada orang macam ni..wawawawa.. 5 stars to you!! <abbr><em>ashabulz´s last thought..<a href="http://ashabulz.blogspot.com/2009/02/majlis-kahwin-jannatunnaim.html" rel="nofollow">MajLis KahwiN jaNnaTuNNaiM</a></abbr></em> erk…gila cuak kalau ada orang macam ni…dua perwatakan yang berlainan jantina…*gulp

very nice bro..jantung saya suspen macam nak pecah dah…janganlah ada orang macam ni..wawawawa..

5 stars to you!!

ashabulz´s last thought..MajLis KahwiN jaNnaTuNNaiM

]]> By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1010 wahazaextra Fri, 06 Feb 2009 17:58:11 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1010 AJ, Mumtaz tu dia skizofrenia, mcm Ina cakap. Bila dia tgk cermin, refleksi dia dalam cermin bukan Mumtaz (pompuan) tetapi sebaliknya Jehan (lelaki). Jadi dalam ep 1, ep 2, ep 3 tu semua apa yang dia buat (tapi sebagai Jehan - dalam fikiran dia). Tu yang dia senyum balik. Dlm ep 3, tu yang dia tgk dalam lopak air, dia nampak diri dia sebenar iaitu Mumtaz. AJ, Mumtaz tu dia skizofrenia, mcm Ina cakap. Bila dia tgk cermin, refleksi dia dalam cermin bukan Mumtaz (pompuan) tetapi sebaliknya Jehan (lelaki). Jadi dalam ep 1, ep 2, ep 3 tu semua apa yang dia buat (tapi sebagai Jehan – dalam fikiran dia). Tu yang dia senyum balik. Dlm ep 3, tu yang dia tgk dalam lopak air, dia nampak diri dia sebenar iaitu Mumtaz.

]]> By: wahazaextra http://www.wahazaextra.com/2009/02/06/resahku-sesak-di-dalam/comment-page-1/#comment-1009 wahazaextra Fri, 06 Feb 2009 17:52:40 +0000 http://www.wahazaextra.com/?p=1691#comment-1009 Inah, thanks! This is my first time writing suspense-thriller story; Glad you scared; Inah, thanks! This is my first time writing suspense-thriller story; Glad you scared;

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